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Post by &&.LIGHTNING -// on Mar 23, 2008 9:35:47 GMT -5
Name: Lightningfury [preceeded by lightningkit, lightningpaw] Gender: Tom Rank: Warrior Clan: 17 Moons
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Description:Lightningfury is about your average young tomcat. Seeing as he spent moons training, his muscles are well developed and strong. His head is round, with a round muzzle, tipped by a black nose. Don't even try going in there, it's full of sharp white teeth, which assist him in fighting and hunting. His eyes are lemon shaped, and a deep yellow in color. Large, triangular ears are on top of his head, whichflick in all directions, simply searching for signs of danger. Tom tom's shoulders are broad and strong, giving his paws powerful blows. Same with his legs. They're lean and strong, making him very fast. His paws are small, but he's learned to balance quite well on them. Long claws, sharp and silver, tip each paw like knives. Lightningfury's fur is short and soft. He grooms it often, but not excessively. He'd rather be hunting that grroming his pelt. But anyway, this tom's fur is black as midnight, with no markings of any color. This aspect helps him hide easily at night, so he's often a good choice for spying or night patrols. Picture: click.xx Personality:Lightningfury is loyal to anything that he believes in. He believes in his clan and his friends, so he's loyal to them. He's very reliable, and can be trusted to keep secrets or pass on a message. But he doesn't always do as he's told. If he believes that something that he's told to do if he thinks its not the right thing to do. He won't help to attack an innocent clan, or hurt an innocent cat. But he doesn't deal well with betrayal. If a friend of his turns their back on the clan, he might go into a rage, making the cat pay for the secrets they were told, the the friendship that they had, that the betrayer ended. Lightningfury is very willing to trust anyone in his clan, and easily makes friends in the other clans. He does not know that he had so many relatives in all the clans. History:Mother: Lilyfeather Father: Stormfate Siblings: Cherrystream, Cougarpaw, Darkpaw, Honeyleaf
Lightningfury has a very complex family tree. It consists of over 50 members, spread throughout all the clans, most deceased. But it began in ThunderClan and RiverClan, with a ThunderClan cat named Firedflames, and a beautiful RiverClan cat named Mistedwhisper. MIstedwhisper had a single kit, named Lilykit. But clan life did not suit her, and she became a loner as her nickname, Lissy. Lissy met a tomcat, named Feat, who had a brother in ThunderClan, named Tigerfang. Lissy had kits, but that story is a seperate one from this. Here we are focused on Tigerfang, and his RiverClan mate, Brownleaf.
Brownleaf had a single kit, Waterkit, but the mother died on the river. Waterkit was taken to RiverClan, where Feat and his only living daughter, Tremblekit, were living. Butwaterkit, who soon became Waterpaw, was not comfortable there. She left the newly named Tremblestorm and returned to ThunderClan with her father. There, at ThunderClan, she met Dazemist. But Dazemist was not her focus. It was her son, Drizzlestorm, that she grew to know and love. But whjen Dazemist's kits, Lilykit, Redkit, Tansykit, and Juniperkit, Watercloud fostered them as Dazestar fell in battle. Now, getting closer to the present, there was an apprentice named Stormpaw.
Stormpaw was Lilykit's star. She admired him in every way. As she was made an apprentice, he caught her staring several times. Soon they were both warriors Stormfate and Lilyfeather. She hung around with him everywhere, and he soon began to suspect. Finally, he sighed and said, "If you don't think I know that you like me, then you must think I'm an idiot, Lilyfeather!" She admitted herself to him, and he relaxed around her. Soon Lilyfeather was expecting the dark grey tom's kits. Watercloud felt as though the kits would be her grandchildren, though she already had some. Ashwhisker, her actual son, had a mate named Shivercloud, who'd had kits.
Lilyfeather had the kittens, safe and sound, and named them Lightningkit, Darkkit, Cougarkit, Cherrykit, and Honeykit. But Stormfate was injured in a battle, and an infection in the serious throat wound killed him. Lilyfeather was devastated, but managed to guide her kits to apprenticeship. Lightningkit was mentored by a tom named Flameheart. Flameheart was a very good mentor, kind but strict with learning. Lightningpaw soon became a seasoned apprentice. But tragedy struck through sickness. A strange sickness swept through ThunderClan. Darkpaw and Cougarpaw were killed, As were Drizzlestorm, Watercloud, and Lilyfeather.
But Clan life went on. As the sickness cleared, Lightningpaw, Honeypaw, and Cherrypaw were made warriors. Lightningfury, Cherrystream, and Honeyleaf were proud warriors. But Cherrystream wasw disobedient. She fell in love with the RiverClan tom, Sparkcloud. But one day, as they were meeting, Cherrystream fell in the lake. As Sparkcloud tried to save her, they both drowned. Honeyleaf had been very close to Cherrystream. The she-cat comitted suicide soon after Cherrystream's death. So now Lightningfury has no family that he knows of in his clan. He's alone. IC:[from another site, hope its okay...]
The sunlight shone through the ceiling of the medicine den, casting a soft green glow over the contents as it filtered through the leaves. A once musclular looking tomcat lay in a nest, his body thin, hid fur ragged. He lay there, quivering slightly from the pain, eyes wide open and clouded. His light blueqrey pelt was heaving with the effort that it took for him to breathe. And all this had started simply because of him eating a rabbit.
Shatteredbrook was out of the den, that he knew. But she shouldn't be. She was supposed to be curing him, not leaving him here to die. But the young she-cat didn't deserve to have to sit beside him, day and night, when it was so sure he would die anyway. But she hadn't given him his poppy seeds so that he could at least not be feeling all this merciless pain. If Waterstar, the love of his life, were here, things would be better. Drizzlestorm's body relaxed slightly as he thought about her.
A beautiful dark-grey pelt, river-blue eyes. But he knew she must stay away. He didn't want her to be lying beside him, dying painfully. He had no idea that his daughter's son had become deputy. If he had, he would have stumbled out to congratulate him. But Waterstar would bring him news, that he was sure of. He coughed, his lungs aching and his body trembling. He wanted to see her, wanted to see her now.... Password: Secrets
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Post by &&.LIGHTNING -// on Mar 29, 2008 15:26:53 GMT -5
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Post by &&.LIGHTNING -// on Apr 13, 2008 6:52:17 GMT -5
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Post by l.ast of the [wild]s on Apr 20, 2008 14:58:07 GMT -5
Sorry for the wait! Looks good Kako.
*Accepted
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Post by &&.LIGHTNING -// on Jun 4, 2008 19:20:08 GMT -5
thank you!
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