Post by mystickit on Jan 18, 2007 17:23:41 GMT -5
Name:
Fadenight
Gender:
Tom
Rank:
Warrior (If it would be okay, I'd like it if he could get a high position in the Clan, deputy or leader. Otherwise I'm fine with him being just a warrior
Clan:
Shadow
Description:
Fadenight is a mostly grey tom. He has a light colored head, while his body is a mix of dark and light grey. Fadenightc ould also be considered silver. His head does have a silve tint tio it. His pelt is very veyr soft and smooth. Many cats would call him handsome.
His ears are very large and fuzzy. They are very good for hearing prey in the undergrowth, which helps make him a good hunter. The tip of his ears are all siler, which sparkle in the sunlight of day, and the moonlight of night.
Fadenight's nose is a brownie brown. It is small, but still good for smelling prey and other things among the forest.
His eyes are a faded green. That's where he got his name Fadenight. Most thought his name should have been Fadeeyes, but Fadenight still loves his name all the same.
His paws are small and swift moving. He and move fast on his small paws and dogde around branches and bushed easily.
Picture:
Personality:
Fadenight is what you would call determinded. He sets goals for himself, and won't stop until they are completed. This warrior had amazing leadership quailties, and always has, he was mentored by the Clan leader. He goal for himself to to one day lead his Clan, and he won't stop trying until he's done this.
Though Fadenight has his serious side, he loves adventure. He has always been very adventurous. Especially as a kit and apprentice. Once he became a warriort, he tried to stop his old ways, but seems to always go back to them.
History:
Fadenight has had a pretty nice life so far. He was born in the dead or leafbare. The snow was falling all around his mother. Small white flecks came down one by one, settling on the ground and melting away quickly. When his mother, Flickereyes, gave birth, it was a good birth. There were no problems. She didn't die, all the kits were healthy, and she had penty of milk for the kits. There was no sickness in the camp, and the kits were soon old enough to venture from the nursery. Fadenight, at that time known as Fadekit, loved to play with the older cats. Though they were never to keen to play with him. While playing with his sibliing and other kits, he was always the leader of the kits. When they play fighted, he was always the one to win. You could say he was the favortie kit from the litter. He was strong and smart, and would be a promising warrior one day. Though Fadekit may have those talents, he did have an eye for adventure. One day, when the snow had started to thaw and the sun shone brightly, uncovered by clouds, he slipped away from camp. He really didn't know where he was going, or what he was going to do. So off he went, slowly at first, stopping every few seconds to sniff a flower, or looked closely at what might be a cats foot print. He caught a mouse and burried just like he knew warriors did. It was a small mouse, but a mouse all the same. While sniffing a flower, he sniffed something else as well. Something he'd never smelled before. When Fadekit followed the sent trail, he couldn't believe what he say. There, looming over the small kit was a big, white and black creature. Fadekit had heard about them from the elders, but he had never seen a bager before. Shocked at what he was seeing, Fadekit stood still, staring. The bager soon picked up Fadekit's sent and started toward tyhe kit. Fadekit quickly started to run, but was scooped up by the bagers large paw. Fadekit had blaced out after that. Everyone tells him that the bagermust have flung him onto the ground and he had fallen uncouncous. A patrol out looking for him found him just in time. They quickly chased away the bager and saved Fadekit's life. When he came to he was back at camp. Unlike other kits, his heart for advenute didn't weaken, but became stronger.
Fadekit later stayed in camp though, fearing another scolding from the leader and his mother. So Fadekit stuck to his play fighting which he won and his roleplaing where he was always the leader. When his sixth moon arived, it was time for him to become an apprentice. It was no mystery that many of the warriors wanted to be the one to mentor Fadekit for his skills and strength. Though none of the warrior were able to mentor him, the leader decided that he would mentor him himself. All Fadepaws friends were jelous of his mentor. Soon the two started to train together and Fadepaw say just how a leader acted and started to develop into an amazing warrior. BY his eighth moon, many thought he was ready to become a warrior. Though the leader decided he should stay an apprentice for longer like the rest, even if he was ready. So Fadepaw got more training than other aprentices. Of course though, he was never a prefect apprentice. His heart was still very adventurous, though he longed to be a leader and knew he would hav eto control himself. When he weas 9 moons old, Fadepaw decided he wanted to see the other Clans. She the smart one he was, decided to go into ThunderClan. Nothing happened and Fadepaw was disspointed that he didn't see any cats. Only he knows of his journey there.
When it was finaly time for him to become a warrior, Fadepaw was bouncing everywhere. His name was Fadenight, and he loved it. For some time he was happy and strong as always. Though his mother died after becoming an elder. Fadenight was a senior warrior now, and it was sad when his mother died. Though he was glad he never knew who his father was, and wouldn't have to go through this again, but in a way, wished he did know. Fadenight got over his mother's death slowly, but now is happy agaon, he knows he will one day again see her in StarClan.
IC:
Moonlight could be seen reflected in the small pool of water in front of the silver tom. The moon's rippled appreance gave the pool a small glow. Though the moon was not the only thing reflected in the glowing pool. The image of a cat could be seen. His eyes faded green and his pelt mixed of different colors and shades. His ears sparkled in the light of the moon, giving him a handsome feature.
The tom moved his tail around his small paws and covered them to show only silver. Whith a yawn, Fadenight looked around. The sky was dark and the woods were queit. What was there to do when the clan was asleep. Though he knew he should be sleeping, he couldn't help but be out when the moon was up. Fadenight just loved the moon, loved to look at it, loves to talk about it. Whatever. It always shined so bueatifully, and gave his pelt a shinning silver appreance.
Fadenight thought for a moment. He hadn't brought any fresh-kill back to camp for a while. Why not hunt in the light of the moon, something he was sure to love. After a quick hunt, catching a mouse, Fadenight started for camp. His eyes sprakled in the light, and he grinned, nothinf was better than his night outtings.
Password:
Secrets
Other:
I know it's not done yet, but can you tell me what you think so far and if I shuld improve anything?
Fadenight
Gender:
Tom
Rank:
Warrior (If it would be okay, I'd like it if he could get a high position in the Clan, deputy or leader. Otherwise I'm fine with him being just a warrior
Clan:
Shadow
Description:
Fadenight is a mostly grey tom. He has a light colored head, while his body is a mix of dark and light grey. Fadenightc ould also be considered silver. His head does have a silve tint tio it. His pelt is very veyr soft and smooth. Many cats would call him handsome.
His ears are very large and fuzzy. They are very good for hearing prey in the undergrowth, which helps make him a good hunter. The tip of his ears are all siler, which sparkle in the sunlight of day, and the moonlight of night.
Fadenight's nose is a brownie brown. It is small, but still good for smelling prey and other things among the forest.
His eyes are a faded green. That's where he got his name Fadenight. Most thought his name should have been Fadeeyes, but Fadenight still loves his name all the same.
His paws are small and swift moving. He and move fast on his small paws and dogde around branches and bushed easily.
Picture:
Personality:
Fadenight is what you would call determinded. He sets goals for himself, and won't stop until they are completed. This warrior had amazing leadership quailties, and always has, he was mentored by the Clan leader. He goal for himself to to one day lead his Clan, and he won't stop trying until he's done this.
Though Fadenight has his serious side, he loves adventure. He has always been very adventurous. Especially as a kit and apprentice. Once he became a warriort, he tried to stop his old ways, but seems to always go back to them.
History:
Fadenight has had a pretty nice life so far. He was born in the dead or leafbare. The snow was falling all around his mother. Small white flecks came down one by one, settling on the ground and melting away quickly. When his mother, Flickereyes, gave birth, it was a good birth. There were no problems. She didn't die, all the kits were healthy, and she had penty of milk for the kits. There was no sickness in the camp, and the kits were soon old enough to venture from the nursery. Fadenight, at that time known as Fadekit, loved to play with the older cats. Though they were never to keen to play with him. While playing with his sibliing and other kits, he was always the leader of the kits. When they play fighted, he was always the one to win. You could say he was the favortie kit from the litter. He was strong and smart, and would be a promising warrior one day. Though Fadekit may have those talents, he did have an eye for adventure. One day, when the snow had started to thaw and the sun shone brightly, uncovered by clouds, he slipped away from camp. He really didn't know where he was going, or what he was going to do. So off he went, slowly at first, stopping every few seconds to sniff a flower, or looked closely at what might be a cats foot print. He caught a mouse and burried just like he knew warriors did. It was a small mouse, but a mouse all the same. While sniffing a flower, he sniffed something else as well. Something he'd never smelled before. When Fadekit followed the sent trail, he couldn't believe what he say. There, looming over the small kit was a big, white and black creature. Fadekit had heard about them from the elders, but he had never seen a bager before. Shocked at what he was seeing, Fadekit stood still, staring. The bager soon picked up Fadekit's sent and started toward tyhe kit. Fadekit quickly started to run, but was scooped up by the bagers large paw. Fadekit had blaced out after that. Everyone tells him that the bagermust have flung him onto the ground and he had fallen uncouncous. A patrol out looking for him found him just in time. They quickly chased away the bager and saved Fadekit's life. When he came to he was back at camp. Unlike other kits, his heart for advenute didn't weaken, but became stronger.
Fadekit later stayed in camp though, fearing another scolding from the leader and his mother. So Fadekit stuck to his play fighting which he won and his roleplaing where he was always the leader. When his sixth moon arived, it was time for him to become an apprentice. It was no mystery that many of the warriors wanted to be the one to mentor Fadekit for his skills and strength. Though none of the warrior were able to mentor him, the leader decided that he would mentor him himself. All Fadepaws friends were jelous of his mentor. Soon the two started to train together and Fadepaw say just how a leader acted and started to develop into an amazing warrior. BY his eighth moon, many thought he was ready to become a warrior. Though the leader decided he should stay an apprentice for longer like the rest, even if he was ready. So Fadepaw got more training than other aprentices. Of course though, he was never a prefect apprentice. His heart was still very adventurous, though he longed to be a leader and knew he would hav eto control himself. When he weas 9 moons old, Fadepaw decided he wanted to see the other Clans. She the smart one he was, decided to go into ThunderClan. Nothing happened and Fadepaw was disspointed that he didn't see any cats. Only he knows of his journey there.
When it was finaly time for him to become a warrior, Fadepaw was bouncing everywhere. His name was Fadenight, and he loved it. For some time he was happy and strong as always. Though his mother died after becoming an elder. Fadenight was a senior warrior now, and it was sad when his mother died. Though he was glad he never knew who his father was, and wouldn't have to go through this again, but in a way, wished he did know. Fadenight got over his mother's death slowly, but now is happy agaon, he knows he will one day again see her in StarClan.
IC:
Moonlight could be seen reflected in the small pool of water in front of the silver tom. The moon's rippled appreance gave the pool a small glow. Though the moon was not the only thing reflected in the glowing pool. The image of a cat could be seen. His eyes faded green and his pelt mixed of different colors and shades. His ears sparkled in the light of the moon, giving him a handsome feature.
The tom moved his tail around his small paws and covered them to show only silver. Whith a yawn, Fadenight looked around. The sky was dark and the woods were queit. What was there to do when the clan was asleep. Though he knew he should be sleeping, he couldn't help but be out when the moon was up. Fadenight just loved the moon, loved to look at it, loves to talk about it. Whatever. It always shined so bueatifully, and gave his pelt a shinning silver appreance.
Fadenight thought for a moment. He hadn't brought any fresh-kill back to camp for a while. Why not hunt in the light of the moon, something he was sure to love. After a quick hunt, catching a mouse, Fadenight started for camp. His eyes sprakled in the light, and he grinned, nothinf was better than his night outtings.
Password:
Secrets
Other:
I know it's not done yet, but can you tell me what you think so far and if I shuld improve anything?
