Post by redclaw on Dec 10, 2006 0:25:49 GMT -5
Name: Redclaw
Gender: tom
Rank: deputy
Clan: ShadowClan
Description: Redclaw is a very powerful cat. He is huge with red-brown fur. Redclaw is strong, but not quick. He can overcome many obstacles in his Clan's territory, though. Redclaw's fur is short, but his tail and ears are fluffy. Faint brown stripes can be seen in the light. His eyes are green like emeralds.
Picture:
Personality: Redclaw knows how to fight, but does not act clever around smaller cats. He usually just thinks he can crush them, and doesn't think. Redclaw also wants the best for his Clan. Sometimes he takes this too far and the cats end up badly. Redclaw cares about the strongest and biggest cats. He does not even think about his family. He doesn't like inept kits and apprentices.
History: Redclaw was raised in ShadowClan. As the cats know, the Clan is rough sometimes. Redclaw's parents were one of them. They secretly trained him when he was first born. They taught him to kill right away. This is why he is too rough today.
Redclaw grew up as a powerful cat. He always wanted everything his way, and got it. Cats feared him for his power. When Redclaw was a young warrior, he defeated a badger on his own. Though many cats still aren't sure if this is true, he uses it to frighten young cats.
Redclaw soon became a senoir warrior, still powerful. Nobody thought of the day he would be killed. His leader watched him closley, he thought. He hoped he would someday become deputy. Redclaw one day went into ThunderClan territory to hunt. He bravely scared away a ThunderClan patrol.
If that was fake, then it was good enough to fool the cats. Shortly after this event, the deputy died, and Redclaw took his place. Some cats think it was the right choice. Others don't.
IC: The sky was cloudy and dark, and a thick fog drifted around the trees. Redclaw was bounding through the sodden ground of ShadowClan. His paws sank in the mud, but he could manage to pull them out quickly enough.
The night was cold, and Redclaw wanted to eat. He rested for a moment, looking around. No cat needed to see him now.
The place where his prey was buried was not far. He ran again, and soon came to the tree. The scent of old fresh-kill was thick here.
Redclaw sighed. No one had found his food. He dug it up, and smiled. The cat picked up the mouse and began to carry it back to camp.
This season is too cold and barren to not eat he thought. Redclaw figured he would eat the prey. So, he ripped at the mouse, struggling to find some fresher piece of it.
Hopefully, no cat saw him. He had not brought anything back that day.
Password: secrets
Gender: tom
Rank: deputy
Clan: ShadowClan
Description: Redclaw is a very powerful cat. He is huge with red-brown fur. Redclaw is strong, but not quick. He can overcome many obstacles in his Clan's territory, though. Redclaw's fur is short, but his tail and ears are fluffy. Faint brown stripes can be seen in the light. His eyes are green like emeralds.
Picture:
Personality: Redclaw knows how to fight, but does not act clever around smaller cats. He usually just thinks he can crush them, and doesn't think. Redclaw also wants the best for his Clan. Sometimes he takes this too far and the cats end up badly. Redclaw cares about the strongest and biggest cats. He does not even think about his family. He doesn't like inept kits and apprentices.
History: Redclaw was raised in ShadowClan. As the cats know, the Clan is rough sometimes. Redclaw's parents were one of them. They secretly trained him when he was first born. They taught him to kill right away. This is why he is too rough today.
Redclaw grew up as a powerful cat. He always wanted everything his way, and got it. Cats feared him for his power. When Redclaw was a young warrior, he defeated a badger on his own. Though many cats still aren't sure if this is true, he uses it to frighten young cats.
Redclaw soon became a senoir warrior, still powerful. Nobody thought of the day he would be killed. His leader watched him closley, he thought. He hoped he would someday become deputy. Redclaw one day went into ThunderClan territory to hunt. He bravely scared away a ThunderClan patrol.
If that was fake, then it was good enough to fool the cats. Shortly after this event, the deputy died, and Redclaw took his place. Some cats think it was the right choice. Others don't.
IC: The sky was cloudy and dark, and a thick fog drifted around the trees. Redclaw was bounding through the sodden ground of ShadowClan. His paws sank in the mud, but he could manage to pull them out quickly enough.
The night was cold, and Redclaw wanted to eat. He rested for a moment, looking around. No cat needed to see him now.
The place where his prey was buried was not far. He ran again, and soon came to the tree. The scent of old fresh-kill was thick here.
Redclaw sighed. No one had found his food. He dug it up, and smiled. The cat picked up the mouse and began to carry it back to camp.
This season is too cold and barren to not eat he thought. Redclaw figured he would eat the prey. So, he ripped at the mouse, struggling to find some fresher piece of it.
Hopefully, no cat saw him. He had not brought anything back that day.
Password: secrets
Otherwise that's great, I can picture him perfectly, just need to know what color his eyes are. 