Post by grayfur on Jan 2, 2008 15:48:59 GMT -5
So here are some poems i wrote on HC. feel free to critique
I lay down here in this cold dark world
The hatred i keep is still uncurled
And in this dark and dreary hell
All hope is lost, and you can tell
From my angered eyes and cold harsh speech
All the love in life is out of reach
So I lay down in this cold dark world
Hoping for a better tomorrow.
I come up to you and say, "hello."
It seems our friendship was lost long ago
Now you narrow your eyes and glare at me
But I cant say that I can agree
For, you're wrong to treat me like this
All you do is swear and kick and hiss
You all say that is is all my fault
So I wait for a better tomorrow.
Their wrong to let you go on this way
with the things you do, the things you say
Their wrong to let you treat me like this
Where was our love, where was our bliss?
The only thing that keeps me sane
is the gentle words that my ears strain
To hear in the cold dark world
In which i'm dying under.
Every time i try to join in and talk
Your eyes grow wide with fear and shock
Your only real means of defense
Is language that is a real offense
And I feed into it and so
You are not my friend, but deepest foe
I would look at you with such delight
But all the life in me is out of sight
All thats left of me is my cold shell
As I wait for a better tomorrow
Why am I still even alive
I want to scream, i want to die
But the pain that was kept all inside
Is now my only real ally
For in this dreary cave of hell
The only thing that i can smell
is the scent of you from long ago
And the love that we once shared
So I lie awake, cold inside
My family, friends, all have died
Tears of fearfull dreams and regret
Play a part in this dramatic duet
You all want to rub it in my face
To tell me i'm just a big disgrace
This may not be true, but its how i feel
Until i find a better tomorrow
This poem is dedicated to Frozen.
I lie here
so empty
watching as my world goes by
in my ear
that's aching
broken wings wont let me fly
In this world
so empty
I lie awake dreading my life
but in this world
so bloody
the pain and anguish has turned strife.
I lay dead
and pleading
for something better to appear
up ahead
heart aching
your voice is still so unclear
Broken wings
are falling
through the eerie blood-shot sky
my heart stings
and calling
for you not to let me die
The fast winds
of windstorms
are lifting me into the sky
evil grins
are calling
forcing me to let it die
But its not
not over
not until i reach you again
I have fought
forever
just to see your face again
In this world
so bloody
these broken wings are gone
and i'm still
still falling
to the edge of my dawn
GrayxClo
I look through the window of broken glass
still worryin' 'bout what's in the past
These thoughts that i cannot surpass
are haunting me forever
Its hard to see yourself brand-new
when you really don't have the slightest clue
about the bad things that you did or do
there's no happily ever after
All the memories of your face
are harsh 'cuz my heart won't unlace
as I watch you pack your brown suitcase
But I was you only bailor
I really wonder what went wrong
My heart is where you belong
Was i really that foolish all along?
the memories are getting bleaker
All my life i've wanted you
To see this love, to see it through
then why, i ask, am i so blue
my heart is getting weaker
To you, i was just no dam.n good
How stupid was I to think I could
be the savior of your bad and good
this life isn't any calmer
So I look through the window of broken glass
Why did you treat me like a crass?
do you still even love me? But alas
My thoughts are getting bleaker
Dedicated to Clo. A grayxclo peom.
I hear the parade calling me
Even though I don't know what i've done
They noose my neck, tight and clean
In this ocean of fear, I'm the only one
Get Ready! One man calls
The others do as he says
My face is white where blood appalls
I recognize one man with a Fez
He snorts at me and rolls his eyes
I plead for him to let me free
The crowd gives off annoying cries
They stall a bit for my fancy
The fez reads off the framed crimes
At once my heart starts to lurch
I've heard these accusations a dozen times
The truth in his words is what I search
Two men in black come next to me
The tighten the rope around my neck
Great day for a hangin', they say,sneering
Theres already blood upon the deck
Without another word of hate
They raise me up, harsh and strong
was this really all my fate?
They don't know that their doing wrong
The noose tightens and i can't breath
I struggle, but it;s only worse
I growl and them and harshly teethe
I close my eyes and slip into a deep, black curse.
Rub It In My Face
I lay down here in this cold dark world
The hatred i keep is still uncurled
And in this dark and dreary hell
All hope is lost, and you can tell
From my angered eyes and cold harsh speech
All the love in life is out of reach
So I lay down in this cold dark world
Hoping for a better tomorrow.
I come up to you and say, "hello."
It seems our friendship was lost long ago
Now you narrow your eyes and glare at me
But I cant say that I can agree
For, you're wrong to treat me like this
All you do is swear and kick and hiss
You all say that is is all my fault
So I wait for a better tomorrow.
Their wrong to let you go on this way
with the things you do, the things you say
Their wrong to let you treat me like this
Where was our love, where was our bliss?
The only thing that keeps me sane
is the gentle words that my ears strain
To hear in the cold dark world
In which i'm dying under.
Every time i try to join in and talk
Your eyes grow wide with fear and shock
Your only real means of defense
Is language that is a real offense
And I feed into it and so
You are not my friend, but deepest foe
I would look at you with such delight
But all the life in me is out of sight
All thats left of me is my cold shell
As I wait for a better tomorrow
Why am I still even alive
I want to scream, i want to die
But the pain that was kept all inside
Is now my only real ally
For in this dreary cave of hell
The only thing that i can smell
is the scent of you from long ago
And the love that we once shared
So I lie awake, cold inside
My family, friends, all have died
Tears of fearfull dreams and regret
Play a part in this dramatic duet
You all want to rub it in my face
To tell me i'm just a big disgrace
This may not be true, but its how i feel
Until i find a better tomorrow
This poem is dedicated to Frozen.
Broken Wings
response to wolfheart
response to wolfheart
I lie here
so empty
watching as my world goes by
in my ear
that's aching
broken wings wont let me fly
In this world
so empty
I lie awake dreading my life
but in this world
so bloody
the pain and anguish has turned strife.
I lay dead
and pleading
for something better to appear
up ahead
heart aching
your voice is still so unclear
Broken wings
are falling
through the eerie blood-shot sky
my heart stings
and calling
for you not to let me die
The fast winds
of windstorms
are lifting me into the sky
evil grins
are calling
forcing me to let it die
But its not
not over
not until i reach you again
I have fought
forever
just to see your face again
In this world
so bloody
these broken wings are gone
and i'm still
still falling
to the edge of my dawn
GrayxClo
Window of Broken Glass
Response to Wolfheart
Response to Wolfheart
I look through the window of broken glass
still worryin' 'bout what's in the past
These thoughts that i cannot surpass
are haunting me forever
Its hard to see yourself brand-new
when you really don't have the slightest clue
about the bad things that you did or do
there's no happily ever after
All the memories of your face
are harsh 'cuz my heart won't unlace
as I watch you pack your brown suitcase
But I was you only bailor
I really wonder what went wrong
My heart is where you belong
Was i really that foolish all along?
the memories are getting bleaker
All my life i've wanted you
To see this love, to see it through
then why, i ask, am i so blue
my heart is getting weaker
To you, i was just no dam.n good
How stupid was I to think I could
be the savior of your bad and good
this life isn't any calmer
So I look through the window of broken glass
Why did you treat me like a crass?
do you still even love me? But alas
My thoughts are getting bleaker
Dedicated to Clo. A grayxclo peom.
Noose
response to Wowo
response to Wowo
I hear the parade calling me
Even though I don't know what i've done
They noose my neck, tight and clean
In this ocean of fear, I'm the only one
Get Ready! One man calls
The others do as he says
My face is white where blood appalls
I recognize one man with a Fez
He snorts at me and rolls his eyes
I plead for him to let me free
The crowd gives off annoying cries
They stall a bit for my fancy
The fez reads off the framed crimes
At once my heart starts to lurch
I've heard these accusations a dozen times
The truth in his words is what I search
Two men in black come next to me
The tighten the rope around my neck
Great day for a hangin', they say,sneering
Theres already blood upon the deck
Without another word of hate
They raise me up, harsh and strong
was this really all my fate?
They don't know that their doing wrong
The noose tightens and i can't breath
I struggle, but it;s only worse
I growl and them and harshly teethe
I close my eyes and slip into a deep, black curse.
