The way i feel about you (Axel and Roxas)

[grayfur]

Here's a poem I wrote in Science, and it's based on Axel and Roxas from Kingdom Hearts 2.

(Roxas's Point of view)

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When I look in your eyes
I see my reflection
When I look in your eyes
I see the truth
When I look in your eyes
I see hope and sadness
But when I look in your eyes
I see only you

When I look up at you
I feel happy
When I look up at you
I feel strong
When I look up at you
I feel I can make it
But when I look up at you
It's just wrong

When I'm sleeping and I'm thinking
I'm thinking of only you
I see myself and follow it
And ask, "What do I do?"

When your hands wrap around me
When you hold me so close
And kiss me on the forehead
Is when I feel happiest the most

When I do have nightmares
You're always there next to me
Stroking my hair, holding my hand
Saying, "It's OK Roxy."
Then I know I can make it
When you hold me that way
But I really couldn't fake it
When you left me that day

They would tease me and poke me
Saying it couldn't be true
But I know I'm not mistaken
I do have strong feelings for you
I saw you standing
I saw those cold green eyes
And for once I plainy knew
That this wasn't all a lie

So I cry in my bedroom
Oh how I want you to stay
'Cause on my darkest hour
You wipe my tears away
You tell me everything's OK

So as I sit here and remember
Holding a clover
I can't help but cry for you
Looks like my summer vacation is...
Over.

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Like it? Hate it? tell me.

[dream.]

Great! I don't really know what Kingdom Hearts 2 is, but the poem was awesome.

[grayfur]

thankyou. Spent long time writing it. not sure if i should publish it on a site or not...

[dream.]

^^ I think it's good.

[untilthis.echo]

It's very nice! I usually don't like reading KH fanfics and/or poems, because lately everything on FF.net in KH seems the same. But I definitely enjoyed this! I especialled loved your last line of "Looks like summer vacation's over." I remember that in the game, made me sad.

Quick question, are you a Roxas/Axel shipper?

[grayfur]

i dunno what you mean by 'shipper', but they are my favorite charries, and I love them -hypothetically of course- and I agree. all of FF are the same. they all ahve to do with... kissing. and the last line made me sad as well. thankyou all.

[untilthis.echo]

You answered my question in the Cbox so that's cool. I've never met a shipper of a slash couple on a Warriors site so it makes me happy. They're not my fav couple, since I'm not too fond of KH anymore since I've been playing Twilight Princess, but I did love Axel. He was so cool.

[grayfur]

yesh, and he's so gentle with roxas. WOW! for a 12 year age difference, they ar ereally good tgether.

[untilthis.echo]

Hahahaha!! I never figured out their ages but 12 years apart? XD Dang. For some reason it just makes me crazy mind think that the two deserve each other even more.

[grayfur]

I know how you feel.

[sunsetfur]

Have no clue who the characters are (but I'm assuming that they're from this KIngdom Hearts thing), but the poem itself was excellent and well-written.

[grayfur]

Oh sunset! it's so great you feel that way

[sorrelpaw]

I luffed it. ^-^

[mystickit]

ITs great I love it

[grayfur]

thankyou.