What to do?

[mystickit]

Dropplets of water fell onto the soft green grass. Slowly, they
soaked into each blade, untill it glistened like the morning
dew. Though these drops of water were not coming from the
sky, but yet, a small fish. A shinning body of a fish flopped
aroudn on the grass. Taken out of the water by a stroung
black paw, it struggled to get back into it's home. Unable to
breath above water. Sadly for the fishm it wouldn't have the
chance. Four razor sharp claws ripped through the fishes
slipery body. Crimson red blood fell out of its body and
stained the grass. As the claws lifted out of the fish, they
dripped with reddness and gleamed in the sunlight. Jinxfire
lifted his bloody paw up to his mouth. His pinkish colored
touges cleaned it quickly, savoring the taste of teh sweet
fish. Jinxfire had alway loved fish, their taste had always
been one that could keep him eating untill it came back up.
When he was a kit, he first tried fish. His mother had
brought it over to him, and had told him and his kin what it
was. Jinxfire had wrinkled his nose, who wanted to eat
something that swam in the river? After his mother forced
him to try it, he would never forget the taste.



The multi-colored tom sat down besides the stream. He
loved this steam. Always quiet here. The bambling of the
water over the rocks always calmed him down. Weather he
had been teased, or had he just had a hard day, this is
where he came. Jinxfire closed his eyes. Though his eyes
were closed, he could picutre what was in front of him
perfectly. The brillant, bright blue sky with puffyf white clouds
like marshmellows. The golden sun which brightened up all
things on earth. The sparkling stream that reflected the sun.
The small sandy shore on each side of teh stream. The
many trees, with forest green leaves hangging from every
branch. Jinxfire opened his eyes and saw just that.



The RiverClan tom lened over and took a bit out of his fresh
fish. H echewed it carefully, making sure to suck all the
wonderful flavor out of the dead animal. After fully chewing up the fishes carcas, he swolled the piece in his mouth. He
did this until the whole fish was gone. With a sigh he let a
smile play across his face. He would never be tired of this place.

ooc: Is this long enough for you to roleplay with me Gray??

[grayfur]

ooc: it is, but you need to break it up into paragraphs jinx. But I like it, its hard to read though.

[grayfur]

Look at this post real quc. Doing Lyrics help.


Click for the longest posts in the world

OK I'll start. See how i'm breaking up the post?

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Silent paws slipped through the weedy grass, eye like fire. His gray pelt matted and overgfown. His angry blue eyes flaring sadly. The deputy sadly walke through the grass, his head down. The dew on the grass was noticable from his cut up eyes, and his soul was ripped from his body. Grayfur was just a shell, just left pout to rot.




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Grayfur loomed over to a tree and sat down, gazing at the cat in front of him. The cat was trying to catch fish, was he? Well, he was failing miserably. grayfur chuckled. Jinxfire, his friend. When the fish was dead he looked awat nervously. Horrible emories flooded back to him. He whispered her name, only her name, as tears fame to his eyes. Oh, why did she have to go?



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He was doing a messy job with the fish. It was getting everywhere. There were cleaner ways to kill, grayfur though. But he didn't want to think. he just huffed and returned to watching Jinx. He was beautiful, he was handsome. And... grayfur had come to love him so much. He gritted his teeth, not wanting to watch anymore of the killing.



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Realizing that this cluld be his first kill, Grayfur watched intently. He seemed to enjoying himself. But what could he be thinking of? Grayfur tried to watch the expressoin on his face, but Jinx wa so calm he struggled to see it. He stepped out of the shaded area of the tree, just a bit. The beautiful cat ran his teeth against the fish's skin. Grayfur could only smile, and then withdraw to his sanctuary.


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[mystickit]

A russle of leaves came from behide him. Though it could have been anything, wind
blowing the leaves and russling them, or prey scurring in the undergrowth, it wasn't
either. Jinxfire sniffed the air and caught the sent of a RiverClan cat. He couldn't tell
which cat it was excatly without looking, she the tom turned his head, to see non otehr
than Grayfur.


The two cats had always had their differences, it had been settled before, or so he had
thought. From his spots in the shows, he couldn't be sure what expression was on his
face, but from where he was, it looked like a smile. Not a normal smile, though, but an
evil one. Jinxfire narrowed his eyes and stood up.


Unlike most all of the cats in his Clan, he was veyr large. He was twice the size of a
normal warrior and was extremely muscular. There was much stength in one blow of his
paw, but if it came down to a foot race, he would lose in an instant. Even as a kit he
was slow, he'd lose every race.


Jinxfire faced Grayfur and took a tentive step forward. "Grayfur?" he meowed
softly, and cuasously. "Greyfur, is that you?" Jinxfire heart beat faster as he saw the smile he was hoping wasn't there.

ooc: I'm skip the lyrics This better?

[grayfur]

ooc: Notes to post Jinx: its better if you don't cstner it. it look unprfessional. Also, you might wanna put

between your posts, so that it makes it more centerish. Here's the outcome.

Post without blockquote.

Post with blockquote.

see? Just things to think about.

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Grayfur stared at the warrior. He did not lie jinx, but he had given up on fighting with him. There was just nothing he could do. Jinxfire was just... a baffoon. He had no idea what was going on or the time of day. Grayfur sighed, and leaned against the tree. The left side f his face was scratched and cut up badly. There was a long scar that ran down his eye. The side of his face was covered in blood, but his azure eyes still shone through.



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Grayfur frowned at the warrior. I was not a nevil smirk or a look of disgust. It was just a sad, blank look. As if he were staring right through him, Grayfur just stared, his blue eyes drooping somewhat, and his face was plastered with a sad expression. He sighed, and looked away, ashamed at manipulating Jinx's throughts.



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Grayfur's heart was torn and discombobulated. His whole body was a mess. Blood now flew frely from his body, and his scars would not heal. He was a wreck, a complete catastrophe. His whole soul ahd just crumbled and fallen apart. Grayfur gave up on life a long time ago. it was hopeless, wasn't it? "Grayfur is that you?" the sound from Jinx's mouth errupted inside him like fire. Was this really him? Was it? No, it couldn't be. He continued to just stare blankly at him, before adding a hollow, "... I don't... know."



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