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Post by untilthis.echo on Dec 4, 2006 1:01:24 GMT -5
The children of two enemies is cliche, though once in a while it's cool to use. Just don't use it too often. Like the forbidden love is being used to often. =P I hated the CrowfeatherxLeafpool hookup.
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Post by silentstar on Dec 4, 2006 15:51:57 GMT -5
She does over use the "forbidden love" too much. Graystripe and Silverstream,, Bluestar and Oakheart, Crowfeather and Featherpelt, Crowfeather and Leafpool, even Firepaw and Spottedleaf. And two perfect examples of the love/hate relationship are Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight and Snadstorm and Firestar. Corny? Cliche? [censored] yeah! Erin needs to work on her plots and writing style before publishing her next book.
Do not cuss on this website!~Twilight
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Post by dream. on Dec 4, 2006 18:40:21 GMT -5
Well, I agree that the "forbidden love" idea has been way overused. Its getting way old now. *yawns* We need something new...exciting...different than the same thing that always happens. I have the feeling that PO3 is going to be different, from all the stuff I've read about it.
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Post by silentstar on Dec 5, 2006 17:40:37 GMT -5
I'm not going to read it. I stopped after Dawn. I was far too dissapointed with Twilight to finish the book and continue the series.
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Post by untilthis.echo on Dec 5, 2006 18:42:45 GMT -5
I'm going to read it anyway! I don't care much if there are some cliches, but I want to know how it ends. If I don't see the end, I'll pull out my hair for not knowing.
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Post by dream. on Dec 5, 2006 19:10:49 GMT -5
Yeah, I wouldn't be able to give up warriors eather. No matter how bad the writing gets...
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Post by silentstar on Dec 6, 2006 19:55:07 GMT -5
I'm a critic. I can write a five paragraph persuasive essay about why someone shouldn't read a book. I tore Flowers to Algernon to shreds. And I was far less than kind with The Five People You Meet in Heaven. I'm an insufferably irritable critic when it comes to poorly written books or poorly planned plots.
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Post by M A t t. on Dec 6, 2006 22:29:26 GMT -5
 How's our plot looking then? Maybe you should give me some hints and tips... By the way, this is Dreamy and Hail. Dreamy typing. =] |
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Post by untilthis.echo on Dec 6, 2006 22:52:32 GMT -5
Gee that sounds harsh. I can take some level of criticism as long as it's to make my writing better, but criticism just because a reviewer doesn't like my writing, can make me irritated. Which is why I plan out my stories almost fully before I begin with the writing.
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Post by dream. on Dec 8, 2006 18:19:35 GMT -5
I write, forget, and toss. I've never finished a story yet, that's not due for school.
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Post by [ so so suicide ] x-moo// on Dec 8, 2006 23:07:24 GMT -5
If you don't like warriors then why join a warriors chatline?
Don't diss warriors! I love it to death, and NO CUSSING!!! That is NOT going to tolerated on this site!
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Post by dream. on Dec 8, 2006 23:22:20 GMT -5
? ? ?
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Post by dream. on Dec 8, 2006 23:23:38 GMT -5
Oh. Okay. *blinks* bright red?
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Post by untilthis.echo on Dec 8, 2006 23:26:02 GMT -5
Ah I see it now. Silentstar, maybe you shouldn't use that word in terms like that. It could offend someone, as it obviously offended Twilight.
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Post by dream. on Dec 8, 2006 23:36:28 GMT -5
*shrugs and keeps her mouth shut*
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